The Hungry Scavengers
The world is as lively as it was a few hours
before. But the world inside the boy sitting on the steps at the entrance of
the dilapidated hut is annihilated as if it never existed before. The corpse of
his mother lies on the cold floor under the dripping roof. The wind has stopped
blowing and the sky is getting dusky with the accumulation of thick layers of
clouds at the horizon. The mother birds are returning to their nests, after the
tiresome day, to feed their loved ones waiting for them. The baby monkey, on a tree
few meters from the hut, is glued to the warm breast of his mother and looking
into the fearsome eyes of the mother repeatedly. The hyenas, hidden behind the
bush, are waiting for the corpse to be buried so their children can be fed.
The ominous
silence sets in and the boy constantly stares at the barren land lying before
the hut. The face looks like an old white statue in a museum, not dusted for
many years. The channels of dried-up tears can be seen amidst the dust on the
cheeks. The world seems superfluous to him. Suddenly, his body vibrates and his
face turns greenish-white like a raw tomato. This is followed by a few more
tremors. He returns to the same position as he was- staring at the ground. But
this time he is not blinking his dried eyes.
The sun is rising at the horizon and the hut
stands the same as it was last night. However, no one can be seen anywhere. At
the place of the corpse are the claws of an animal and at the place of the boy
is a pool of blood.

Great story ...loved it...what a description...great work
ReplyDeleteRight observation
DeleteExcellent story
ReplyDeleteFantastic
ReplyDeleteIt held my eyes the same way as the first read..!! Blew my mind with evey twist and feels..!! Keep it up..!!!!!!
ReplyDeleteThank you Avid Reader
DeleteKeep up the good work manu
ReplyDeleteThanks ma'am
DeleteWoww ...good story
ReplyDeleteMind-blowing
ReplyDeleteGreat Manu. Keep it up.
ReplyDeleteThe whole story just went like wooooh. I loved the imagery part... and ur work is amazing Menu..
ReplyDeletelol
ReplyDeleteWow!!
ReplyDelete